Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Fiction Of Dreams V. Existence Of Reality


*Eyes wide shut*

Strolling around a whimsical meadow,
losing  the soul into its fragrance.
Bolting out of a carnival,
based on bizarre strangeness.
Set amidst the silvery moon
A monstrous ,kinky ranch
An old, scary lady ogles
a giant-like tree leaning towards,
In a twist, dancing under the monsoon
Blithesome-care free.
And again,
rolling in the dune
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*Eyes Wide Open*,

Sincerely,
tumbled upon own thoughts,
rise up, bewildered.
Nudged into the presence of certainty,
tasting back the bitter/sweet reality.
Profusely,
Pull out to legitimate life.
Plagued, provoked, satisfied or pleased
Annoyed, gratified, soothed or angry.

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*Eyes open-shut*,

Sluggishly,
Inexplicable emotions,
juggling in and out,
Wanted-unwanted thoughts,
roaming around.
And soon, taken over,
by the unfathomable,
Unmeasured journey
Of  Illusion. J





6 comments:

  1. *Eyes bright-shining*
    Writing adorable emotions,
    Breathing life into words.
    Smile,
    Because you deserve to...

    I like :)

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    1. And I likessss the comment above.
      Thank you :)
      God bless..

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  2. That was a lovely comparison of dream vs Reality as seen by eyes shut / open and shut open:) BTW your new profile pic is nice, Yashi!

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    1. Glad that you liked it, Sir.
      And yes, Thank you for the compliment. :)

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    1. Thank you so much and "Phatichar" seems really innovative and different name. ;)
      Thanks for visiting ..Take care.:)

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